Wednesday, September 21, 2011

How can a green dress change or destroy a 16 year olds life?

i am writing a novel and i dont know how my main characters life will change or be destroyed when she wears this puke green dress to her sisters wedding.How can a green dress change or destroy a 16 year olds life?
The groom finds her attractive in it...which can take the book in a whole different direction!



Seriously, though, there is not enough information to give a good answer. Is she and her sister at odds? Does the dress represent anything? What has the 16 year olds life been like up until this point? Is she a happy girl? Sad? Introvert? I just can't seem to figure out what the color of a dress has to do with changing or destroying the life of a 16 year old at a wedding. NEI. Sorry.How can a green dress change or destroy a 16 year olds life?
as many who have bought and are wearing the same dress to the wedding,,!!!
I dont think it will ';destroy'; her life. I just think she will be embarrassed.
Green dress. I request you to please look out side your window and count the number trees. Trees (Greenry) are gradually garduating from abundance to luxury goods. If I take the same lines as you have written ';THE GREEN DRESS OF EARTH IS GRADUALLY DESTROYING';. Hope it wont deviate your story line. Good Luck!!!
The guy she has a mad crush on sees her in that, and the look in his face she realizes she can forget him.
the boy she really loves, the boy she will give her whole live to is at the wedding. He sees her is this awful green dress. You can tell that he reacts in a bad way to seeing the bad taste she has displayed by wearing this green dress. ( I mean yeah this guy is really shallow. No doubt) Because she has displayed such bad taste he will never see her again. He breaks off the relationship they did have.

She totally caves in and this is something she just cannot get beyond. it ruins the rest of her life just thinking how she lost this guy.

also it was her sister who insisted she wear the dress in the first place... so now she also hates and won't speak to her sister for ruining her life.



Now cut to 40 yrs into the future. the sister who's wedding it was dies. the other sister ( the one who wore the green dress) must dispose of her dead sister possessions. When she is going thought the possessions she finds the love letters from 40 yrs. ago between the boy friend and the now dead sister. Her sister was having an affair with her boyfriend and the whole Green Dress was just a set up so the boy friend could break it off with the sister.
Obviously, if the 16 y/o girl chose to wear this green dress she must not be concerned about how this WILL change her life. You make this sound as if this DRESS has detrimental effects like swallowing poison. Anyway, who could ever get by with telling a 16y/o what to wear.

I also don't understand the signifigance, point or purpose of this green dress in your novel.

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